Round One Edits COMPLETE.

Yesterday, I finished the first round of edits for one of my manuscripts. I want to take it through another round on my own before letting anyone read it. I also want to forget about it for a bit so I can look at it with fresh eyes (again) prior to the next round, so I’m setting it aside for a bit. In the meantime, I’m editing the novel that I finished back in February that I referenced in that link above. It’s been almost two months since I last looked at it, so I decided now is as a good time as any to dive into it.

I’m still at the beginning, but one thing I’ve noticed is how much outlining and structuring up front has helped my writing. Yes, it’s a ton of work up front, but this book already reads so much smoother than some of my earlier work. I thought I was going to hate it when I went back to it… but I actually kind of like it.

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February and March Writing Reports

Editing is weird.

When I’m working on a rough draft, it’s easy to count how many words I’ve written. The convenient little word count feature in Scrivener shows me how much I’ve written that day. It’s relatively simple to write 500-1,000 words. They may not be the most beautiful words and they may need to be edited later, but still, the actual tracking of words written is easy. Therefore, progress is easier to see, too.

Editing is different. It’s more mentally draining, so I can’t do it as long as I can write. It’s also harder to estimate word count. Parts get deleted and rewritten. I’ll read over a couple thousand words and rewrite some of those, rearrange others, and leave the remainder alone.

That being said, I spent most of February and all of March editing. So while I do have writing reports for both months, they’re a bit different than usual.

In February, I wrote 8,824 words. That’s an average of 315 words per day. Most of those were written on or before February 10, which is when I finished the draft I was working on (yay!) and started editing a different manuscript. I missed 14 days that month.

In March, I wrote 8,396 words. That’s an average of 270 words per day. That was all during my editing process and I missed 16 days.

The good news? I’m approaching the end of my first round of edits on this manuscript. I’ll probably let it sit for a little bit while working on something else. Then it’ll be time for another reread and probably some more edits of what I missed the first time around. I have a feeling I will be very tired of this book by the time I’m finished editing.

Diving Right In

Ten days ago, I finished the third draft of a novel. I’d been working on it for… far too long, considering the end product. Including my time outlining, I was occupied with the thing for over a year. (I started outlining in December 2016.) And I’m not even close to being done with it. I know it needs a lot of editing, starting with some cuts in the beginning. The first act of the story, which should be approximately the first quarter of the book, is a tad on the long side. Plus I’m considering redoing the entire book in third person rather than first. First person is really, really, really hard to write well, in my opinion. (I will point you to the many mediocre first-person novels out there. There are a ton of them.) I’m not sure if this book really requires first person, the more I think about it, so a rewrite may be in store.

I don’t like to edit immediately after finishing something, though, so I put that manuscript aside. The day after I finished it, I started editing something else. It’s another manuscript I finished back in 2015, meant to edit, but then never got around to it. A writer’s work is never done, you guys. Anthony Trollope the prolific (and financially successful!) Victorian novelist wrote every day—even if he finished something. As in, if he still had time left to write after finishing, he started on his next project that very same day. Brandon Sanderson, a modern novelist who is very, very successful (he writes fantasy and supports his family with his writing, which is basically my dream), wrote thirteen or so novels before he got published. And it wasn’t the thirteenth one that was published first. It was the sixth or seventh that managed to spark an editor’s interest and launch his writing career.

Now, I don’t want to jinx anything or get ahead of myself… but that manuscript I mentioned above, the one I finished in 2015 that I’m editing now? I actually sort of like it. Don’t get me wrong, there’s a lot in it I have to fix. I’m reading through it now and have almost five pages of notes already. But I feel like it has actual potential. I’d love to get it into a state where I actually feel comfortable pitching it. Because I’ve never pitched a novel before and that’s something I want to do this year.

January 2018 Writing Report

I don’t actually write with quills, thank goodness!

You know, January was a halfway decent month for writing. I wrote a total of 18,640 words, which is an average of 601 words per day. My goal was to write 600 words per day and I just barely made that. But just barely does count, so that’s good! I only missed 13 days of writing.

I’m happy to say that I’ve started February off strong. I’ve almost finished writing the third draft of my current novel! I anticipate finishing that up this weekend, if not sooner. After that, I’ll be working on some editing. I’m still trying to come up with a way to track editing. Should it be tracked by the hour? By number of words written? Some combination of both? I’m still figuring that out.

Happy New Year!

Happy New Year, everyone! Shortly after I wrote my prior post,* I went to the Balmy Tropics. It… wasn’t the best trip to the Balmy Tropics. The weather was great but the certain events continue. At least my mom and I went shopping and out to eat multiple times when I was there.

I wanted to start the year off right, so I wrote over a thousand words today. I still need to post my 2017 writing report—it probably will be lackluster, but I’m just trying to push forward and keep working on my writing. I’m planning to finish the draft I’ve been working on and I have a couple of short stories to edit.

Anyway, I hope everyone had a good New Year’s Day. It’s back to work tomorrow, which I’m not looking forward to because I haven’t gone to work in over a week! It’s going to be a rude awakening tomorrow…

*In my prior post, I mentioned a book I’m excited for later this year. In fact, I’m so excited that I put a countdown in the sidebar of this blog! It’ll be in the sidebar or at the bottom of the page, depending on what device you’re using to read this blog. If you’re reading via RSS or email, I think you have to click through to the blog.

Massive Four-Month Writing Report

I’m back, dear readers! Don’t worry, my silence this time wasn’t as long as last time… I was just busy celebrating the Thanksgiving holiday with my mom. We ate a ton of food and did a ton of shopping. I ended up with some new yarn—which I definitely do not need, considering how much yarn I have lying around at home, but it’s such beautiful yarn that it’s okay—and I went back to work last week. (I will post some pictures of the yarn, but not tonight because it’s getting late!)

I also am trying to get back into my writing. I’m tired of feeling too demoralized and sad to write. I will write! I will finish the book I’m working on. I hate leaving projects unfinished. There’s always hope that a finished project, even if it’s a bit raw and ragged around the edges, can be edited and polished into something a bit more beautiful. As it stands right now, my current work in progress is about halfway complete. I need it to be fully complete to edit it.

Anyway, I realized that I haven’t done a monthly writing report since July. That’s appalling! I don’t want to write four separate posts for August, September, October, and November, especially since those months weren’t so great for writing, so I thought I’d combine them in this post.

  • August: 17,400 words, daily average 561 words
  • September: 12,116 words, daily average 403 words
  • October: 11,086 words, daily average 357 words
  • November: 5,119 words, daily average 170 words

Now, this wouldn’t be a bad thing if I’d been outlining on paper, as I often do, but the sad truth is that by November, I was barely writing anything. In August, I did pretty well. In September, I wrote one short story. In October, I went back to my current work in progress briefly. And in November, I did a little bit of outlining for another project (because I was convinced I’d have to abandon my current project) and wrote a short story (my first in the horror genre!), but that was it.

The good news is that so far this month, I’ve written more than half of what I did last month, which is good. I don’t really have a word count goal for this month beyond reversing the dismal trend above. Basically, I just want to write more words this month than last. And I am going to finish my current work in progress so that it can someday be edited. Now, if only I could get better at editing… fellow writers out there who have the whole editing thing down, how did you do it?! Inquiring minds want to know, as I’m so much more comfortably brainstorming and outlining and writing than I am editing.

I Have Returned.

I am Grand Admiral Thrawn. I have been away, but now I have returned. I know some of what has occurred. You will fill in the details of the rest when I come aboard. Rejoice, Captain, for the Empire will rise again.

–Grand Admiral Thrawn, from the story A Grand Admiral Returns

Yes, dear readers, it is true: I have returned. I’ve been away from blogging for a while—over a month, by my count—and I was questioning whether I wanted to continue writing this blog. You see, there have been certain events taking place in my life over the past month or so that really threw me for a loop. These events are ongoing, by the way, so unfortunately there is no resolution (yet). Due to this, I’ve been having trouble doing anything I enjoy lately, aside from reading.

Since I wasn’t doing other things I like—writing, knitting, playing violin—I’ve been reading. A lot. I’m on track to read over a hundred books this year. So much for getting a lot of writing done like I planned. To look on the bright side, though, I’ve had the chance to read a ton of random books I may not have picked up. I read a Star Wars trilogy, which isn’t something I ever thought I’d do! I’m not a hardcore Star Wars fan—I’ve seen one of the movies, know the basic premise of a few others, and that’s about it. I do like science fiction a lot, though, so the books I read (Timothy Zahn’s Thrawn Trilogy) were right up my alley and I enjoyed them immensely. I haven’t read the story from which I took the quote at the beginning of this post, though. I’d love to read it, but it’s a short story, not a novel, and I can’t seem to get my hands on the book in which it was published.

What else is new? I’ve been trying to study Russian more. I feel like I’ve gradually gotten away from Russian and I don’t want that to happen, so I’ve been making a conscious effort to incorporate more Russian into my life. (And just so you know, you can never have too much Russian in your life.) I’ve been listening to some audiobooks and knitting—doing two things at once is amazing, especially when they’re two things you like. And I’ve been going to work, of course, since I need money to fund my reading and knitting.

One thing I have not been doing is writing fiction. The certain events that are taking place made me so upset I couldn’t write. I became especially upset at the novel I was working on—I can’t even look at the thing right now. (To be fair, I had been getting rather frustrated with that book long before the events started taking place. I have a bit of a history with that manuscript and I’m beginning to think it’s time to just let that idea go and work on something else.) I’ve started brainstorming for a new book I’ve wanted to write for years. It’s historical fiction that takes place in Soviet Russia. I also have a manuscript I need to sit down and edit, but I haven’t done that yet, either.

I am back, though. I don’t want to give up blogging. I don’t want to give up Russian. I don’t want to give up writing fiction. I’ve missed having them in my life. It’s late enough right now that I’m going to bed soon—but I will work on some writing tomorrow, even if it’s just editing a few sentences in my manuscript for fifteen minutes.

July 2017 Writing Report

Obligatory writing instrument.

July was a pretty good month for me, writing-wise. I wrote a total of 23,621 words, which is an average of 761 words per day. My novel is coming together pretty well, though I think the first act is going to be too long, which means I’ll have to cut chapters or move some stuff around (or both).

Anyway, my July word count is even better when you consider that only wrote for fifteen days in the month. What helped push it higher were some really high word counts. The highest number of words I wrote in one day was 4,049, which is a lot for me. I hope I can get some high word counts this month, too. I didn’t write during my vacation, so I’ve got some catching up to do! 🙂

June 2017 Writing Report

I don’t actually write with quills, thank goodness!

You guys, June was a really good month for writing. I got off to a bit of a rocky start because of the certification exam, but then I really took off and it was great. I’m really happy about this. I wrote a total of 19,918 words in June, which is an average of 663 words per day. That’s almost to my goal of 700 per day that I set for this year. I missed only 13 days of writing, which isn’t too bad. What really pushed me over the edge were a couple of 3,000 word days I had in there. Seriously, 3,000 words is a really good word count (for me) and I’m pleased I was able to do that twice. (Just so you know, I’ve already done it once in July, too!)

Oh, and I finished a draft of my science fiction book. This book has had many plot and character changes, so I think this was draft #4. I haven’t read over it yet and I’m sure it needs editing, but I really hope it doesn’t need another rewrite because a fifth rewrite sounds a bit ridiculous, even to me.

How’s your writing going?

A Weekend In Bullet Points

  • I got home early on Friday, which was glorious, but then the electricity went out less than an hour after I got home, which was not so glorious.
  • Since it went out due to a storm that blew in, a ton of people in the state were out, so it took a few hours for it to be fixed. I didn’t know when it was going to come back on, so I ended up going to Whole Foods for dinner. I actually hadn’t wanted to go out, but everything I had to make required electricity to make it. Some people were out for way longer than I was though, so I’m not complaining.
  • I shopped and read books on Saturday. Oh, and seven months after starting the draft of my novel, I finished it on Saturday night around ten pm. Of course, I immediately started on another book, the one I was outlining concurrently with writing the now-finished draft.
  • I wish I could stay home and write tomorrow. Why don’t we make random days writing days when we don’t have to go to work?!
  • On Friday I picked up a book of essays about the Russian revolution. I haven’t read it yet, but I’m looking forward to it because it looks really good.
  • I wrote so much last night and tonight that I think my June word count will be amazing based on that alone. I really need to throw in more 3,000-word days because those really have a way of upping the daily average! 😉