November Writing Report

Obligatory writing instrument.
Obligatory writing instrument.

Welcome to the November Writing Report! November was a strange month for writing. I didn’t do NaNoWriMo—not this year—but a lot of people I follow on Twitter did. They were racking up huge word counts while I had… 0, at least for a while.

I had 0 words for nearly the first two weeks of November because I was finishing up an outline. Luckily, that outline is done (I outlined by hand and dang, it took a very long time to do) and I’m actually working on a project, which makes me feel productive again. Outlining is essential to my writing process, but somehow it doesn’t always feel productive. Maybe because it’s difficult to get an accurate word count when you hand-write things. I’m considering doing my next outline on the computer and then printing it out when I’m finished.

Anyway, I wrote 12,986 words in November, which is an average of 433 per day. Though if you only count the days that I was actually writing (i.e. finished with the outline), that average jumps up to 721 per day (I had 18 writing days in November). I like that number better, so we’ll go with that. 😉

Anyway, I’m planning to finish the year strong and keep working on my current project, which is a major rework of a novel I wrote last year. The first version had some… issues, but then I learned a lot more about story structure (though I was aware of story structure, I never really bothered to learn about it until this year, which is very foolish of me!), so this current version has a definite structure, both on the scene level and the big-picture level. It’s funny how that works: plot points up move your story forward and it’s great. Who would’ve thought?!

I’m not going to end up with as many words this year as I did last year (we’ll talk about that in more detail when December is over), but I did some good writing this year. Spoiler alert: one of my 2017 goals will involve actually sending that writing out. 😮

October Writing Report

Obligatory writing instrument.
Obligatory writing instrument.

I almost didn’t post a writing report for October because it was kind of strange month, writing-wise. I didn’t do much writing that’s easy to record in my writing log. (Yes, I have a writing log. It’s in a spreadsheet—I use Apple iWork’s Numbers but Excel would also work—and it’s awesome.) By that, I mean I finished writing a short story, and it’s easy to track the word count for that. But then I started writing an outline for my next novel. (That, in and of itself, is a bit of a story. Basically, I had a bit of writer’s block and couldn’t decide which of my ideas to outline. Long story short: I managed to make a decision.) I studied story structure and scene structure and character development. As a result this outline has become massive. I worked on it most days in October and it’s still not finished. And I have no idea how many words it is because I outline by hand in my writing notebook.

Anyway, I only wrote 4,730 words in October. That’s 4,730 words in my word processing program (thank you, Scrivener, for the awesome word count tracker thing you have!). If I had to estimate how many words I’ve outlined… well, I think the total word count for the month would surpass 10,000 and possibly 15,000. But there’s no way to know for sure unless I type all of my outlining and brainstorming up, which I don’t intend to do.

I’m hoping to finish the outline in the next week or so. Then, I’ll begin drafting this novel. It’s actually a major rework of a novel I wrote at this time last year. This new version is way better plotted and way more interesting (in my obviously unbiased opinion, haha).

Oh, and that short story I mentioned earlier? I’m planning on submitting it for publication. Of course, if it is accepted somewhere, I promise to tell all of you blog readers. 🙂 Be patient, though. Unfortunately, the writing and publishing world works extremely slowly…

September 2016 Writing Report

Obligatory writing instrument.
Obligatory writing instrument.

Happy October, everyone! It’s finally started to cool off where I live—thank goodness—now that October is here. And a new month means it’s time for a writing report. I’m happy to say that September was a pretty good month for me, writing-wise. I wrote a total of 22,885 words, which is an average of 763 a day. That’s actually my best average this year! I took eleven days off from writing, which is pretty good since that means I had some pretty good word counts on the the days I wrote. (My highest was 3,357, in case you’re wondering.)

I also started working on a new short story at the end of the month (it’s in progress right now and I hope to finish it later this week) that I’m really excited about. I brainstormed the scenes in a different way than I usually do and I feel like it’s a stronger piece already. I plan to submit it to magazines, so if it gets published, I’ll announce it on the blog.

Who’s ready for a busy month of writing in October?! It’s the month before NaNoWriMo, which means if you’re participating, it’s probably time to start outlining…

What To Do When Your Novel Just Isn’t Working

Alternate title: Doing Things The Hard Way

Another alternate title: When You Want To Pull Out Your Hair Due To Your Current Writing Project

I’ve been having trouble with my novel recently (more on this later on in the post) and that made me think of some other things from my life. Observe:

  • When I decided to learn a musical instrument, I chose the violin. Now, I realize playing an instrument is always hard, but violin is probably harder than most because there’s no guide for where to put your fingers. You just have to practice a lot until you get a feel for it. And by “practice a lot,” I mean you have to play for years before this becomes second nature.
  • When I decided to learn a foreign language, I didn’t choose one that is in the same language family as English (like German) or at least had a big influence on English (like French). No, I chose Russian, which isn’t even written in the same alphabet we use in English!
  • When I decided I wanted to go into business, I chose one of the more difficult fields: finance. Not only that, but I started studying it at the masters level and did a condensed program that meant I took almost twice the usual credits a typical graduate student at my school took all while studying a brand-new subject and searching for a job.

I list all of this not to brag, but to show that I seem to like doing things the hard way. Therefore, it probably won’t surprise you that when I went to write a book—and I mean a serious attempt with the aim of publishing it someday—I chose to do a series instead of a standalone novel.

Let me make a few things clear: first, writing any book is hard. Period. But I think certain books are harder than others. In general, non-fiction is easier to write than fiction, and fiction in a series is harder than fiction that is standalone. Why is the latter true? Because aside from juggling all the characters and plot threads and plot developments in one book, you have to make sure that the series itself has an overall arc. In the Harry Potter series, each book has its own plot development and resolution, but each book as a whole also contributes to one massive overarching storyline. It’s enough to make your head want to explode.

This brings me to the main point of the post: I’m having a lot of trouble with my current manuscript, the second novel in a science fiction trilogy. By trouble, I mean that the whole thing didn’t feel right the entire time I was outlining, and now that I’m writing, it doesn’t feel right, either. I’m sorry I can’t be more descriptive, but that’s a lot of what writing is for me: there’s a certain feel to certain things you do. Basically, my intuition is telling me something’s wrong.

I think there are several things at work here contributing to my novel troubles. In no particular order, they are:

  1. Writing a series is really hard, so maybe I’ve bitten off more than I can chew at this point. After all, I’m not a writer with decades of experience. Even experienced writers struggle with plotting and then properly executing a series, I’d imagine.
  2. My story idea may not be a good fit for a series. As in, I may be stretching an idea out into three books that could be better covered in one or two.
  3. I’m not fully finished with edits on the first book, so I’m kind of jumping the gun by moving onto the second book. My subconscious realizes this and is resisting my efforts.

There may be other problems, too, that I don’t see, but for the moment, this is what I’ve come up with.

So what can one do about this? Here’s my plan. First, I’m going to continue to edit the first book in my series (though theoretically it may become a standalone novel, but we’ll see). I need to do some structural changes, then hopefully I’ll be able to talk about the book with someone else because after a while, it is so hard to evaluate your own work.

Second, I’m going to work on something completely different. Editing is so difficult that I can only do a certain amount before my eyeballs want to fall out, so when I’m not editing or working or doing my other hobbies, I’m going to outline and write a fun novel. It isn’t set in this same science fiction world. If you really want to know, I’m kind of tired of science fiction right now! (I never thought I’d say that, but editing has a way of making one tired of just about anything.) For me, fun books involve spies, Russia, and good things like that, so that’s all I’m going to say about this other project. Oh, and I’m trying out an awesome new outlining method using Excel (you can do a Google search for this if you’re interested because there are ton of good posts out there explaining how to do it) that seems to be working well so far.

Will I accomplish my goal of publishing something this year? Honestly, I don’t know. It’s still the beginning of the year, so I have hope of getting a halfway decent manuscript by the end of 2016, but I don’t know if that will happen or not. The only thing I know for sure is I’m doing my best not to stress about it. This whole experience I’ve described in this post has been a bit stressful, but I don’t want writing to be stressful. Ultimately, I want writing to be something I enjoy. It’s been great fun for me in the past and I want it to be fun again.

December Writing Report (Plus EPIC Yearly Overview)

In case the title doesn’t clue you in, today’s writing report isn’t just for the month of December. I’m also going to have a yearly overview, which is exciting because 2015 was my first year to seriously track my writing. So here goes…

In December, I didn’t write much because of editing and end-of-the-year vacation. Therefore, I wrote only 4,555 words, which is an average of 146 per day. That’s depressingly low, so we’ll move on to the yearly portion right away.

In the year 2015, I wrote a grand total of 222,484 words. That’s an average of 609 per day. Wow! I’m very pleased with that amount. Some—or maybe even most—of those words may not ever be published (trust me, a lot of the stuff I’ve worked on in the past is just plain bad), but I do feel like there’s improvement in my writing. I’m a strong believer of the idea that the more books you write, the better you’ll get. The improvement may be very, very slow, but it will happen.

What’s next for me this year? I’m writing a first draft of the second book in my science fiction series. I also have a few more edits planned for the first book in said series. There are a couple things about the structure I want to change, so a lot of that will involve moving scenes around. I hope I’ll finish those edits and get at least one, if not two drafts of the second book done this year, but we’ll see.

What are your writing goals for 2016?

Two Great Posts About Writing

I read two great posts about writing this week. The first is by Robert Jackson Bennett and is called Some advice to aspiring writers who wish to make a living off of writing. Basically, his advice amounts to the fact that writing is hard and you’ll probably need a day job to support yourself for a while, if not for your entire career. Here’s one of my favorite parts of the post:

I moved from job to job based on whether or not it paid a dollar an hour more. There were a lot of call centers. I wasn’t on the fast track to big career success by a long shot.

Then I got lucky. I met the right person, who helped me get a decent job that made me actually think and work. If I had not known that person, I would not have gotten that job.

To my surprise, I found it stimulating. I found it meaningful. And I did well at it. A good job, I found, made me feel better and write better. It’s like exercise – the more your blood’s moving, the better everything works.

But as I did this and settled down into the career path before me, I started wondering what else I could have been. What else I could have done.


This is one reason why I think it’s unwise to begin your young life with writing as the sole goal for your career. It is smart to diversify, for a number of reasons.

As I said above, it’s nice to have a job or a focus or some kind of life goal that you can invest yourself in besides writing. It’s energizing, educational, gives you value, and helps you keep perspective. Staying around other people and working with them is probably good for you, and good for your writing. It can be volunteer work or family or gardening, perhaps, but it helps if it’s a job – because writing, on its own, will almost certainly not be able to comfortably sustain you. Certainly not if you also have a spouse and a child or two.

And this is one reason why it really is very helpful to have marketable skills. Because someone who has always been Just a Writer will likely have very few of these.

Reading that made me feel better. Sometimes I worry that I’m not Living Up To My Potential or whatever as writer because I have to go to work during the week so I can, you know, actually have money to live off of. And that’s okay. I’m just going to keep writing fiction. Hopefully I’ll sell something to someone at some point. 🙂

The other post I read tackles writing from a slightly different angle. It’s on Rachel Aaron’s blog and deals with “paying yourself first.” Rachel is a full-time writer and supports her family with her writing, if I remember correctly—so no more day job for her! In her post, she talks about making writing a priority in your life:

People, this is HARD. In fact, I would say getting the discipline to write every day–even when you’re not inspired, even when the writing sucks and you hate it–is the single hardest part of being a writer. It’s certainly where the most people screw up and fall out. They start writing just fine, but then things get busy, and the daily writing gets put off and off until it stops all together. We know we should be writing, but we aren’t, because stuff/life/time.

To be clear: there’s no shame in that. If writing was easy, everyone would have a book. At the same time, though, you will never finish a book if you’re not putting in the time to write. So if your goal/dream/New Year’s Resolution is to finally finish that book, or even just write more in general, my advice to you is to treat your time like you’d treat your money and pay yourself first. Simply put, this means you make your writing time your priority every single day. Before you do anything else.

She goes on to say that when she was working at her day job, she used to get up two hours early on workdays so she could write before work. I guess this means I ought to start getting up earlier to write. (Sigh. I’m so not a morning person.)

I must say, though, there is something liberating about getting my writing done before work. Sometimes, when I leave work at the height of rush hour and get home and have to make dinner, the last thing I feel like doing is writing. But if I write in the morning, I don’t have to worry that I won’t get a chance to write later in the day. This is definitely something I will have consider implementing this year.

Oh, and both of those posts are excellent, so go read them in their entirety if you’re at all interested in writing.

The 7/7/7 Snippet Challenge!

Fellow Writing Challenge participant J.R. Frontera tagged me in a cool challenge yesterday. It’s called the 7/7/7 Snippet Challenge. Here are the rules:

  • Go to page 7 of your work-in-progress
  • Scroll down to line #7
  • Share the next 7 lines of your manuscript in a blog post
  • Tag 7 other writers (with blogs) to continue the challenge.

The snippet I’m sharing is from my current manuscript, the first book in a science fiction trilogy I’m working on. It’s called Sentinel and I’m very proud of this work, as I feel like it’s one of the better things I’ve written.

Counting to the seventh page is easier said than done, though. I write in a computer application that doesn’t really do pagination (it’s called Scrivener and it’s awesome), so I exported my file to a Apple Pages document (Pages is Apple’s answer to Microsoft Word and it is also awesome) and then counted from there. Here’s what I came up with.

“We served in the Fleet together.” Artyom got that faraway look in his eyes that always accompanied him when he talked about his time serving in the Fleet.

The screen dinged with an incoming hail. “That must be him,” Artyom said. He answered and a man’s face popped up on the screen.

Salvia wrinkled her nose in disappointment. Radek didn’t exactly inspire confidence. His hair was wild, he had a beard, and his clothes were very mismatched, to put mildly. He didn’t look like the capable ex-Fleet officer Salvia was hoping for.

This scene occurs when my main character first meets a somewhat sketchy underworld criminal-type dude who’s going to help smuggle her somewhere she’s not supposed to be. (Yes, I know that’s vague, but I don’t want to give too much away!)

For this challenge, I nominate:

If you’ve already participated, aren’t working on anything at the moment, are too busy, etc., obviously it’s okay if you don’t post. 🙂 But I’d love it if you did because I’d love to see what other people are working on!